| Noctis Lucis Caelum WIP |
| Hades | Date: Friday, 2011-02-25, 8:23 PM | Message # 1 |
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| You can edit it or shade it, it'd help. :D
(I still can't shade T.T )
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| triviumninja | Date: Saturday, 2011-02-26, 3:34 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Some pretty obvious proportional issues there. Top heavy and tiny arms with a rather large ear... Added (2011-02-26, 3:34 Am)
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Still a WIP, but thats what i've got so far:
Just need to raise his collar and add in the missing limbs/hair =3
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| Hades | Date: Saturday, 2011-02-26, 5:35 AM | Message # 3 |
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| Wow, Triv. It's really good! Would it be neccesary for me to look up a tutorial on proportions, or will I eventually learn to make it correctly myself? I know my shading & stuff is terrible... I doubt that I'll ever get it right, though. T.T
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| triviumninja | Date: Saturday, 2011-02-26, 11:11 AM | Message # 4 |
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| Your shadings not that much of an issue, Its nice to see someone who adds folds and such to the clothing.
My only advice for that would be to limit your colours a bit
As for proportions, thats just down to practice really.
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| Hades | Date: Sunday, 2011-02-27, 3:44 AM | Message # 5 |
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| I know, I use too much colors. :P
How is the height & folds on this one ?_?
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| jintaro | Date: Sunday, 2011-02-27, 11:31 AM | Message # 6 |
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| i think his legs are really short and stubby and the colors look too light
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| Pinwheel | Date: Sunday, 2011-02-27, 1:37 PM | Message # 7 |
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| looks like a prematurely born penguin.
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| King | Date: Sunday, 2011-02-27, 5:14 PM | Message # 8 |
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| Quote (Pinwheel) looks like a prematurely born penguin.
but its not really that bad but arent his clothes darker??
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| Hades | Date: Sunday, 2011-02-27, 8:45 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Prematurely born penguin? Ouch... my sprites are really that bad. D:
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| salindy13 | Date: Monday, 2011-02-28, 12:01 PM | Message # 11 |
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| Quote (Pinwheel) looks like a prematurely born penguin.
LOL This comment has made my day.
don't click this link...
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| Hades | Date: Monday, 2011-02-28, 4:49 PM | Message # 12 |
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| After that being read, I really feel like quitting.. ~.~
Message edited by Hades - Monday, 2011-02-28, 11:04 PM |
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| Hades | Date: Tuesday, 2011-03-01, 10:29 PM | Message # 14 |
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| Is this any better?
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